Wednesday, October 1, 2008

What if?

“I’m not that fond of apples,” said Eve.
“I much prefer those peaches.
Their pulpy flesh
Is sweet and fresh
And more worthy of your speeches.”

2 comments:

Clik said...

Hi Pete,
you need an editor ;-)

I presume you mean 'pulpy flesh' ?

Peter Goulding said...

Hi Simon,

Long time no hear, hope you're keeping well.
Five bleedin' lines and can't even spot a typo!
Many thanks for that - I have altered it

Pete